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Re: Lily of My Heart Part 1
It's supposed to be read exactly the way its written. I know this isn't the traditional way to write a story but I wanted to be different. Well anyways it's ...
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Re: Lily of My Heart Part 1
Lily of my heart Part 1: Secret Admirers I stare at him through the corner of my eye. Even though Science is the lamest class in school, he's listening intently ...
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Re: This Is Where My Head Is At
When I read your words I got a sense that you are a kind, loving, and wise person. I agree that beauty comes in many shapes and forms. If you ...
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Re: Lavender Rose Chapter 4
This is not like Twilight in anyway. The only thing Lavender Rose and Twilight have in common is that they are both amazing stories. I really see now why Lukas ...
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Re: Lavender Rose Chapter 3
Like always I loved it. I don't understand why Lukas doesn't just give in.
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Re: Lavende Rose Chapter 2
I also love how you lace lyrics into the story. Its like putting matching shoe laces in the holes of a nice pair of shoes. Well I'm going to keep ...
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Re: My Book (Chapter 8)
I think until I read more, this is my favorite chapter. Nicholas and Charlie have a love that doesn't need to be explained because it just is. I don't think ...
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Re: Lavander Rose Chapter 1
I really enjoyed Lavender Rose. I love this title by the way. Also I love the name Crescentia. Well I must say that after I finished this chapter I kind ...
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Re: My Book (Chapter 7)
Please don't tell me this is all. I loved this. True brilliance. Post more. Please. I beg of you. Nicholas is all I can think about. He is such a ...
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Re: "My Book" (Chapter 6)
I feel like I know the characters now. Tell them I said hi LOL. Well anyways again I am impressed. I love Nicholas as you probably already know. Well I'm ...
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Re: "My Book" (Chapter 5)
I totally agree with Fall, you're my fav writer here. If you were to get this published I would buy this. Your words are like a soft beautiful fluorescent light ...
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Re: My Book (Chapter 4)
You're a fabulous writer and each minute I read I get so addicted. Elizabeth I think is going to be the antagonist but I like her. I think Nicholas would ...
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Re: "My Book" (Chapter 3)
I'm hooked. I love this!!! My favorite part was when Nicholas told Charlie that they didn't have a heartbeat or that they didn't need to breathe. Charlie's reaction was so ...
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Re: My Book (Chapter 2)
I think I'm in love with Nicholas. You built up his character so well. I can tell that Charlie and Nicholas will fall in love, am I right? Well anyways ...
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Re: Burning All My Memories
Loved it!!! True Brilliance.
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